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[Closed] [Private] [15+] Mysterious Shadow Elites
« on: December 23, 2009, 01:09:29 AM »
This is a story WingZero0079 and I started on MSN a while back. It all started by a random conversation that popped out of nowhere.

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It started with me hopping into an F-22, the latest fighter jet of the US military. He was some random jet fighter, but neither of us remember what his was. Let's just go with an F-22 counterpart or something with similar capabilities. Ok, that aside, we fought a bit, then he transformed to the Wing Zero from some Gundam series. I fought as the jet fighter for a bit longer before I transformed that into an experimental mobile suit.

After a while of that, we started to turn it into our own story.

Here's the basics, this is a fanfic of the Gundam universe, namely around the Gundam Wing era. However, we don't use any of the characters from the official series. Ours are in a different reality of sorts.

WingZero0079 uses Gundam-based suits, while my own faction uses mobile suits of their own creation. Specifications on those mobile suits are classified, but the general idea is that they work silently and quickly. They are a mercenary group that relies on stealth capabilities to evade radar detection. Their latest suits are experimental models that they use in live field testing. The pilots are well aware of their dangers and would sacrifice their lives if needed.

Clothing is much like our current day and age. Styling hasn't changed all that much from the years. The only major piece of clothing that stands out are the suits used when piloting a mobile suit. The suits used for the Shadow Elites are skin-tight for both male and female pilots. The suits are used to help interface to the computer system within the advanced mobile suits.

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Age limit I'm not too concerned about. However, limits are applied for those who are piloting mobile suits. The youngest at which a character can be is 14 years of age for training. They usually can't become an actual mobile suit pilot for at least 4-6 years, depending on how their training progresses. If they excel in their progress, they can skip ahead of their class to pilot mobile suits.

The oldest will vary depending on the person. This is due to the fact that pilots vary in ages greatly, while most everyone doesn't get the ranking to command a base until after 20-30 years of working. But, this will depend.. So, there is no set limit for the oldest, but for pilots, the oldest at which someone can become a pilot is about 25.

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Characters

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Name: Mariko
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Eyes: Red
Hair Length: Mid-back
Hair Color: A light pink.
Hair Style: Her hair is left as-is. She doesn't use ponytails or anything when she's not on duty. However, on rare occasions, or special, she will put her hair into a high ponytail. Her bangs on the other hand, are left unchanged. They are spiked and go a little past her eyes.
Occupation: Test Pilot for an elite mercenary group.
Personality: She's a straight forward girl. She doesn't necessarily take no for an answer, but she also acts somewhat differently in a mobile suit compared to when she's not in a suit. While she isn't in her suit, she will most likely act like any other girl you would meet. Though, when duty calls, she goes from her pleasant nature to being quite serious at what she does.

Mobile Suit
There is no set mobile suit that she fights with. However, her favorite is the following and the most common you may expect her to test in:

Code Name: X-0133 Fighter
Vehicle Mode: F-22 Raptor
Weapons: Medium range beam rifle, two beam sabers. Occasionally will be equipped with sabers attached on the wings.
Melee Combat: Excels at melee combat. Has excellent turning capabilities and is very quick to attack.
Armor: Light-Medium, has radar absorbing technology.
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Name: Hitoshi
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Eyes: Blue
Hair Length: Quite short, only around his upper neck-line.
Hair Color: Jet black
Hair Style: He has none to speak of. His hair is spiked and his bangs only vaguely covers his eyes.
Occupation: Special Pilot of the Zeons
Personality: He's very serious about doing his work. He will complete his missions to the fullest extent that he possibly can. Not tolerating failure, he will put his life on the line to try and complete his duty. He comes across as a coarse character, someone you don't necessarily wish to mess with.

Mobile Suit
The mobile suit was one that he had stolen from the Shadow Elite Mercenaries. However, it is an older and out-dated model while working there, it is still a very formidable opponent.

Code Name: X-0025 Killer Scythe
Vehicle Mode: Jet fighter type craft
Weapons: Long-range beam rifle, beam scythe attached on the back for melee combat, head unit has twin gattling guns.
Melee Combat: Although it is not the best at melee combat, it has an advantage of its scythe. It uses the scythe to keep a distance between it and the opponent, all while attacking.
Armor: Medium, out-dated radar absorbing. It does not absorb radar signatures as well as newer types, however the armor itself is able to repel light-based attacks for a limited time before systems begin to fail.
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Name: Akemi
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Eyes: Amethyst
Hair Length: Lower back length.
Hair Color: Emerald Green
Hair Style: Her hair is almost always in a low ponytail. Her bangs, however, she uses part of her hair to cover her right eye.
Occupation: Pilot for the Earth Federation
Personality: To some people, she comes across as a ditz. She has a very out-going personality, has a tendency to be clumsy, but at the same time, she's pretty smart. Being carefree, she does what she likes most of the time, and some accidents work in her favor as pure dumb luck.

Mobile Suit
She has no personal mobile suit to speak of. At some point, however, she will be awarded a mobile suit of her own, but for now, it is classified until this happens.

Code Name: N/A
Vehicle Mode:
Weapons:
Melee Combat:
Armor:

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Useful Information

Earth Federation: The Federation is a Global Government formed from the varying nations of the world to protect against the Zeon attack. The civilians run this Federation in times of peace, while during attacks and war, the power is then transferred to the military to take action. The Federation mobile suits will sometimes consist of the following: GM, GM Sniper, Guncannon, Guntank, GM Custom, GM Quel, RGM-109 Heavygun.

Special Units:
Wing Gundam Zero (Currently piloted by Xenfis)
Altron Gundam (N/A)
Gundam Deathscythe Hell (N/A)
Gundam Heavyarms (NPC)
Gundam Sandrock (NPC)

Zeon Alliance: Zeons are a faction against the Earth Federation that think they're better than they are. They will do just about anything to until the Federation is under their control and have absolute control over the Earth's colonies. The Zeon mostly uses the following mobile suits: MS-05 Zaku I, MS-06 Zaku II, MS-07 Gouf, MS-09 Dom, 125MS Taurus, 06MS Leo, 08MMS Cancer, 09MMS Pisces, 02MD Virgo, 02MD Virgo II, 17MS Serpent.

Special Units:
Gundam Epyon
Tallgeese I, II, III
Vayeate
Mercurius
RX-78GP02A Gundam "Physalis"

Shadow Elites: The Shadow Elites, are, what they are dubbed as, are an elite mercenary organization that are paid to do various pieces of work. They side with neither good nor evil, and will work for anyone who pays the most. They specialize in stealth technology so they can evade radar detection, and work on their sniping performance. Some of their suits are more specialized in melee combat, while others are heavily armored for sniping. (The armor is sometimes used to protect against the kickback from certain shells used.) Because technology is highly advanced on their side, many of their suits will suffer from numerous issues that range from all sorts of problems. Some are minor that include glitches in the computer system, while others can suffer malfunctions in the joints or the suit in general could fail. Their pilots know all of the dangers and risks, but they are dedicated in their work and will work until they're dead.

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This story is rated 15+ for mild language, little blood, and the occasional panty/underwear shot.
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Re: [Joint] [15+] Mysterious Shadow Elites
« Reply #1 on: December 23, 2009, 02:39:17 AM »
WingZero0079's Characters

Name: Xenfis
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Blond w/ some brown
Hair length: His hair goes down to just around his upper neck line. Hair is spiked while his bangs are just past his eyes.
Occupation: Ace Mobile Suit Pilot.
Personalty: Xenfis can be quite a leader when  he needs to be, though he will take orders when he needs to. He feels to be the hero of the battles, though he does depend on some people to back him up when he needs. His skill in hand to hand combat Mobile Suit fighting are superior to that of other pilots. Though he thinks he knows how to fight, hes still got some learning to do.

[Suit Info]: The Model number is XXXG-00W0, the armour is made of  gundanium alloy. The main weapon I use is a beam rifle, Turrets mounted in the head unit, and a beam sword for melee. There's a new weapon that i've been testing w/ the gundam. A sniper rifle. Though the Gundam does not "snipe" all that often, I thought I'd give it a go :) :)
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Re: [Joint] [15+] Mysterious Shadow Elites
« Reply #2 on: December 23, 2009, 07:59:04 PM »
Character:

Name: Renae
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Organization: Pilot for Elite Mercenary Group
Hobby: Sky Watching
Likes: Flying through the sky
Dislikes: The ground, really... really.... hates the ground
Eyes: Green
Hair: Black
Personality: Renae has a laid back personality but can also appear childish at times. She becomes serious though in a fight, but does begin to panic when things don't go the way they should.
Appearance: Waers a typical kimono when not in the flight seat. Has the appearance of a school girl, and she prefers it that way.

Description:

Renae is a pilot for the Elite Merc Group, taught by her father how to fly, she achieved her pilots license at the age of nine and graduated from high school at the age of thirteen. She is not your typical teenager though, she is rather reserved about her past and prefers her feet in the air and not on the ground. She has a good set of assets, but hates men since she feels they aren othing bug pigs who prefer assets over intelligence.

She is a marksmen with the rifle, a gift from her late-father. She can hit a target with a scope in upwards of five miles away with pin-point accuracy. Her skills with piloting a mobile suit, however, are poor and she relys on a lot of feed back from either the tower or her fellow pilots.

Despite all of that; when not flying or training, she takes on the appearance of a school-girl (sometimes wearing a school uniform, or otherwise just normal teenage clothing) she tends to have some sort of music player stuck in her ear which gives off the appearance that she is listening to music - the reality is much different - she is oftne listening to after action reports.... boring huh?

Mobile Suit:

Renae's mobile suit of a transformer type; it's a two-seater stealth figher equiped with a rack of wing-tipped missiles, three each. She has an under-carriage beam-rifle that she can fire in succession along with her missiles. She utilize's the on-board computer to hit targets at ranges further than her 'scope' allows.

Her aircraft has a matte-black coating to it, which complete nullifies rader signatures and keeps her invisible. Even when transformed into a mobile suit, the coating still keeps her invisible, though she usually has to hide to make the invisibility effective (after all, if the enemy see's you - the coating is useless)

When transformed; she has access to her beam-sabre and rifle, and a rack of missiles located along her shoulders. She has fairly weak armor, but because of that she is very agile and can burn away from troublesome areas very quickly. Her agility also makes it easy for her to evade enemy missiles that have locked onto her, one of the advangeous to having a stealth coating - enemy rader lock missiles can't lock onto her. Her engines were designed to shield the heat exhaust, making her somewhat immune to heat seeking missile. She also has the ability to hover in the air, similiar to the harrier, but this makes her a stationary target and easy for mobile suits equiped with beam rifles to hit her. She prefers to snipe from exthremely long distances and can effectively assault a base as long as it's not been alerted to her presence. She also prefers to hide in clouds, which provides her temporary safety until she fires, which usually scatters the clouds a bit.

Her one disadvantage is the lack of a chaff, which can be used to spoof enemy missiles. Her armor plating is also not very good against most projectile weapons, and thus she is weak in a close-range fight. However, combined with her speed and agility, and provided her pilot is of equal or lesser skill, she'll last a good deal before needing to retreat.

That being said; Renae prefers to fight in her stealth fighter form due to the added speed and agility - she hates her mobile suit form.



Name: Sakura
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Organization: Supposedly none
Hobby: Stuffed animals
Likes: Her school and stuffed animals, her big sister
Dislikes: violence, death, blood.
Eyes: Green
Hair: Black
Personality: Sakura's personality is more on the childish side, if not more on the preschoolers side since she loves stuffed animals and carries one in her school bag or whereever she goes. She can come off as being rather absentminded, but can also appear to be mature in situations that require it. She is, however, very nieve and easily manipulative, she's also a hemophobic.
Appearance: Wears her school uniform when in school. When not in school, she still wears her uniform but covers it with a kemono.

Description:

Sakura is Renae's eleven year old little sister. She is a seventh grader in elementary school, and attends a prestigious academy that Renae pays for with the money she makes from her missions. Renae is the youngest person in her class and prodigy, but also trying to beat her big sisters graduation record.

She loves stuffed animals and likes carrying them around, which often gives her strange looks by older kids. She is very smart in terms of her classes, but very nieve of the outside world, which makes her very easy to manipulate - though to offset that she has a small group of friends that keep an eye on her (though Sakura's unaware that her friends are actually looking after her by request of Renae)

Edit: no one told me that my mobile suit was missing one very important peice of info -.-
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Re: [Joint] [15+] Mysterious Shadow Elites
« Reply #3 on: December 24, 2009, 09:54:24 PM »
NOTICE: Noratetsu is no longer part of this story. His character is officially an NPC until further notice. No one has offered to take Lenneth and thus nothing is being done currently.

Ryu here was an exception to the joining thing, so I'm allowing him in for now. But, if someone else has enough knowledge on the Gundam series, can PM me and we can work something out.

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Noratetsu's Characters

Character name: Lenneth
Age: 19
Gender: Female
height: 5'8"
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Red
Hair Length: Long, to the Center of back
Hair Style: looks like Rinoas hair From FFVIII, (not good at describing hair)
Occupation: started off in the Zeon Military, piloting a Zaku II, she proved herself a excelling pilot and was put into a special unit to combat the Gundams, that is where she is at now, with the Zeon piloting the new suit Valkyrie.
Personality: has a straight to the point attitude, though can get quick to temper. she doesn't like to use guns and refuses to carry a gun and instead would prefer to go to close combat with some type of blade, whatever she feels like carrying, you could consider her a sword collector. she herself doesn't know why she is fighting, just that she must do it.

Mobile Suit

Code Name: ZAX-000 Valkyrie ----- Prototype
Weapons:Custom High-output beam-saber, twin Vulcan cannons mounted in the head unit.
Defense:Aegis Shield, buckler size, its material gives high defense against beam weapons.
Combat Type: Close Combat only.
Armor: Light, The Valkyrie has a slim frame, and is meant to be extremely agile and fast. it conducts heat very well so that it can continue to move at high output for longer periods. A well placed shot would be the end.
Other things to note: It has wings like Wing Zeros, but are smaller, and it has a high output booster system.
This unit is meant to go in with support to avoid drawing all the fire.

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Below the line will be a summary of what happened in the beginning of the actual story itself. After this post will be the actual story continuing from that point on.
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After the scuffle between Xenfis and Mariko, the two of them went back to their respective bases to run repairs on their mobile suits. During this time, they had a little while to unwind a bit from the fighting when the Zaft end up attacking. Xenfis and other pilots from the Earth Federation mobilize to hold them off, then the commanding chief emails for Mariko requesting assistance. It took a while, but Mariko eventually reached their base, but it was a bit too late. Wing Zero suffered some damage, among other units, but she did manage to hold them off and send them away with help from another pilot.

Once all that was done, Xenfis had one more mission for the day for Mariko, a stealth operation to acquire information about new units from the Zeon. This didn't start for a couple hours, so Mariko decided to head back to her base to turn in reports on other findings of what was going on with her suit. She rested up while Xenfis did some other repairs on his suit. After a while, they proceeded with the mission and learned that the Zeon have a new type of Mobile Suit. No information is known about it, but before Mariko left, she planted a tracer into the new suit. Data hasn't come in yet for the mercenary group, but it will be valuable once it starts transmitting the data.

With all of that done, Xenfis and Mariko chatted a bit, had some harmless fun, and then proceeded on with their lives. Xenfis went to clean Wing Zero, upgrade his systems and all that. Mariko, on the other hand, decided to finish her training in her black belt in karate. During her training, things got messy over at the Federations base... Wing Zero, after Xenfis put the chip back into his mobile suit (he took it out to upgrade it), the mobile suit started to act violently and started to destroy the base. What ended up happening was that the Zeon somehow planted a virus in the chip, which caused the suit to go haywire and destroy the base. Xenfis ended up having to stop the suit before it causes more damage and ripped off the head unit off the gundam.

After that point, Mariko finished with her training, and left the room she was in at the dojo. She laid down on a couch to rest after the work-out she went through during the training process to wait for her sensei to give her the results she's been expecting. He then called out for her to follow him to his own room to talk, and that's where we are now.
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Re: [Joint] [15+] Mysterious Shadow Elites
« Reply #4 on: December 25, 2009, 10:03:06 PM »
Mariko enters the room where her sensei is and sits down on the pillow in front of him. “So, how was it?” Nervously asking as her heart is beating very fast. While she's waiting for her answer, some thoughts roll around in her head that maybe she did fail, or that she may have passed, increasing her anxiety on what happened.

A few minutes passed as he takes the time to think, then finally responds, “Mariko, I'm sure you're nervous about your results.” taking a moment of pause, “I am happy to say, that you have passed your testing.”

She was ecstatic to hear this news, but she knows that within the dojo, she needs to keep calm, albeit, pretty hard to do so. She bows respectfully, “Thank you Sensei, I appreciate everything you've done for me.” Then she sits up, smiling.

“You were one of the best students I've seen Mariko. You have done well these past few years since you started. I am proud to have you as my student.” He replied to her, holding out the black belt for her.

She takes the belt, bows once more, then stands to leave the dojo. But, before she can leave, she gets stopped at the desk, “Mariko, congratulations on your black belt. You did an amazing job.” the receptionist said. Mariko nods, then leaves the dojo. Once outside, “Yes! I did it!!” yelling this out, her emotions finally came through after being bottled up within, over-joyed with her achievement. Then, she begins to run back to the base.

In the meantime, the commander for the Shadow Elite Mercenaries is sitting in a chair in his office, but then decides to see what one of his pilots status is. He enters the frequency into his communicator, “Renae, come in. This is the commander, I need a status report on your current mission.”

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Re: [Joint] [15+] Mysterious Shadow Elites
« Reply #5 on: December 25, 2009, 10:25:56 PM »
Renae jerked hard right as she spun her craft to avoid a head-on collision. Through the whining of her engine, she could hear someone speaking into her headset. She glanced down at her rader and tapped it once. "Useless," she grumbled before placing her hand near her throat mic.

"Was all fine until someone dropped the damn ball!" she shouted into her headset and soared higher into the storm clouds. Lightning arced across the way, one bolt touched the wings and traveled to the other side before disappearing into the clouds below. "I only got thirty minutes into the mission before a fighter almost made me, however that pilot didn't just happen upon me it appeared like he was actually looking for someone, meaning someone told these guys I was here," she said.

She leveled out her aircraft and looked over her shoulder; the fighter was several hundred feet behind her and gaining, but based on how he was moving she knew he hadn't yet seen her. She dove downward and then made a loop, just then the fighter flew out of a cloud and again nearly hit her before disappearing.

With a scowl she hit the afterburners and gained some altitude. "This guy is doing a better job of nearly colliding with me than actually trying to find me, either way, I can't complete this mission with this idiot trying to find me," she said and removed her hand from her neck and placed it back on the stick. She needed to concentrate on her flying, or else she'd be another statistic.
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Re: [Joint] [15+] Mysterious Shadow Elites
« Reply #6 on: December 26, 2009, 12:59:58 AM »
As Xenfis finish's up polishing up the Gundam, a call goes out for a Zeon frontal attack. "This early??", he thought. He quickly changes into his suit only to hear a loud explosion outside. "What the hell are they carrying out there?? Bazooka's???" As he takes a look outside, "Oh why did I open my big mouth??...Well guess I got no choice..."

He jumps into the cockpit of the Gundam, ready to take on the task set before him. "I wonder if I can test out the Sniper again....". He makes his way to grab the sniper rifle, and his beam rifle, mounts the beam rifle onto his back and flies outta the base. "Commander, I need you to set a diversion in front of the base...I got a plan". He sets himself in a little forestry area, and kneels down. "Now lets see here"...He pulls out the sniper rifle and starts to take aim. "Hmm...only 5 Zaku's..and a Gouf..doesn't seem to har-...aww crap 3 Dom's too?? *FML* Hmm...alot tougher then I thought..." He aims at one zaku and takes fire..takes out 1 Zaku only for the rest to notice the shot fired. "Oh shi-" He starts to panic as he reloads his sniper.

Shaking a little he manages to take out 3 more Zaku's, leaving 1 Zaku a Gouf, and the 3 Dom's remaining. "Hmm...this is not going to end well.." He jolts back, sniping the remaining Zaku, he pulls out his Beam Rifle and takes care of the Gouf as well. The Doms' [w/ their high mobility] take charge to Xenfis. *sigh* "really...?*..Xenfis pulls out his Beam Sword. "Well no one said this would be easy"..The Dom's begin to circle around the Gundam firing at Xenfis. "HEY TIME OUT I WASN'T READY YET!!" A Dom manages to shoot Xenfis in the side w/ its bazooka. "Oh your going to play like that eh?" He whips his Beam Sword around to slice the head off the Dom only to fall to its knees and becomes disabled. "GOOD FIGHT ZEON" He shouts. "Now for you two!" He pulls out a second Beam sword and begins to dual w/ one of the Dom's. He uses his left hand as a distraction to fool the Dom, then he makes his strike against the Dom, thrusting his right sword through the heart of the Dom. Watching the pilot die, he turns his attention to the Third and final Dom. It begins w/ a 5 second stare-off till the Dom charges at him, getting a good hit w/ its shoulder right into Wing's face unit. "Oh damn it" The Dom then pulls out his heat sabre, and charges again. "Oh not a second time buddy". Xenfis charges w/ his Beam sword in his hand. They clash together sword against sword. Pushing harder and harder into each other, Xenfis quickly jolts back, throwing his left sword into the air, the Dom slowly watch's whats going on..."AHA! Got cha now!!" Xenfis quickly pulls out his sniper and manages a no scope head shot. "WOOT!!" As he watch's the Dom slowly fall to the ground, he celebrates.

"Xenfis, good job today. You did an excellent job holding off these forces as he held off ours. The base greatly appreciates your hard work and effort to fight against Zeon." "Thanks commander" As Xenfis heads back to the base...he begins to wonder...what is Zeon really up to?...
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Re: [Joint] [15+] Mysterious Shadow Elites
« Reply #7 on: December 26, 2009, 09:28:57 PM »
The base commander sat there, a bit puzzled as to who might have leeched the information about the mission. He only could wonder if, just maybe, there was a mole inside his own base. "It just couldn't happen..." Rubbing his head in dismay, only hoping Renae can make it back here safely.

Meanwhile, Mariko is proudly holding her black belt and walking on the sidewalk to get back to the base. "Father will be so happy. I can't wait to give him a call." Then it hit her, "OH!" pulling out her communicator to turn it on. Once the device started, she typed in her fathers number quickly to give him a call. "Please pick up...." The phone rang a a couple times before a voice is heard on the other end.

"Hello? Mariko?" A male voice was on the other end, wondering who it may be.

"Father, its me!" Mariko cheerfully replied, having a lot of joy in her voice.

Her father could only wonder what Mariko is excited about, "What is it? You sound awfully cheerful today."

Mariko could just barely contain her excitement, since she can't help but to smile. "Father! I finally got my black belt in karate!!"

To his amazement, he couldn't find any words to say to how happy he really is about his daughters achievement. "I-is that true?" Stuttering to say a word at the moment.

"Of course! I'm holding it in my hands right now! I'm so happy I finally passed." Staying true to her word, being overjoyed that's almost bringing her to tears every now and then.

"I... Mariko, congratulations. I'm really proud. I would love to hear more, but work is calling, but I"ll call you later as soon as I'm done." He said to her, with a slight breaking up in his voice. "I'm really proud of you."

"Hehe, alright, don't forget to call me." She said, then turned off the phone. I can't wait to put it on. Putting the phone in her pocket, she continues off for the base. "Maybe I should tell him about it..." Pondering on whether or not to tell Xenfis, then blushes at what she's saying. "No no no no, not like that...." Shaking her head now.

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Re: [Joint] [15+] Mysterious Shadow Elites
« Reply #8 on: December 26, 2009, 09:57:28 PM »
Renae eased back on the stick as she came out of the storm clouds; taking a look behind her, she saw that her pursuer had given up and gone home. "Well, that was certainly hair-raising," she said as hit the afterburners and started back for the base.

As she sat in her seat; she placed the recording of the meeting, or what little she did get, into a protective case in the event she had to ditch for whatever reason. Her back pressed against her seat, a small crept across her face as she tapped her radar and smiled.

"Now just to stay on afterburners for fifteen minutes while I head to base," she said before getting awarning alarm. She checked all of her systems and was puzzled, she looked around her fighter but saw nothing wrong. A diagnostic showed a fault in one of her flaps, she craned her head as much as she could before noticing the problem. A small area of her back tail fin was actually missing, causing the flap to flutter in the air, before breaking off due to her speed.

She was puzzled as to how that happened, then realized that perhaps it was because of so many close calls that the other pilot 'did' in fact manage to nick her. "Nothing to pressing, since I still have the other flap, as long as I don't lose both I'll be fine," she said and placed her hands back on the stick.

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Re: [Joint] [15+] Mysterious Shadow Elites
« Reply #9 on: December 26, 2009, 10:47:42 PM »
As Xenfis enters the base, he looks at his Gundam, smiles, and heads inside. You did great Wing. As he enters the main lobby, Commander call his over. "Xenfis, you need to look at this".."yes sir, what's up?". "Look at this video that Zeon has posted today"..Xenfis looks at the screen. That's the Head General of Zeon sir". "I know it is, you should hear what he's saying".

*There is no other way to live, then to live under the control of Zeon. We will show the dim witted earth, that we are a force to be recognised! We will continue to fight, until the Federation is no more. Dust. History!...We are strong enough to fight until we strive to get what we deserve! Never has Zeon taken such a battle so under-minded, that we don't know what to do. We WILL strive to win, and we WILL succeed in our plans. My fellow brothers and sisters of the Zeon Alliance, RISE!. Rise and show this world your true power. That we will not be taken lightly, and NEVER will we be under estimated! We fight for the Zeon Alliance, and we will continue so. WE WILL NOT BE STOPPED. *raises fist into the air* SIEG ZEON!! [Crowd]: SIEG ZEON!!

"Damn those bastards" Xenfis says. "I know Xenfis, times are getting grave, and we need to hurry up and win this battle already". "I know commander, but its not going to be that easy". " I know Xenfis..we need to call Mariko..were going to need all the help we can get.." "Right sir".

Xenfis slowly walks to his dorm arena thinking how the rest of this war is going to play out...


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Re: [Joint] [15+] Mysterious Shadow Elites
« Reply #10 on: December 26, 2009, 11:11:01 PM »
Mariko arrives back at the base and heads for her room. She decides to change into her normal clothing for everyday sort of things and take the next two days off. "Ah, feels so nice to be in normal clothing again." She says, putting on a shirt. Walking out of her room, she runs into the commander, just the person she wanted to talk to, "Uh, sir?"

"Mariko, welcome back. How'd everything go?" He asked her, wondering about how her tests went.

She gave off a very bright smile, "I finally passed!" and holds up her black belt.

"Amazing, that is the genuine deal." He proudly said, holding his hand out, "I'd like to congratulate you on your wonderful achievement."

Mariko shakes his hand, "Thanks, and.. is it possible I can get two days off perhaps?"

The commander takes a moment to think, "I have a better idea. How would you like to have a party in your favor? Your birthday is tomorrow, isn't it?"

Apparently she had completely forgotten, "Oh! I completely forgot...." Blushing with embarrassment.

"Don't worry about it. I'll round up a small team and we'll plan an excellent party for you. Is your father joining?" He asked, since him and her father have been close friends for a few years.

Mariko could only wonder, she didn't know if her father would be able to take time off from her work. "I did talk to him earlier, but I don't think he would forget." She tilted her head as if to think for a moment.

"Well, we'll figure something out. Go ahead and have the rest of today to yourself. You do deserve it after all of your hard work." He then walks off to another area of the building to continue some of his work.

Mariko decides to take this opportunity to walk over to the hanger where her mobile suit is being worked on. Since no one is around it for the time being, she decides to climb onto the wing of her craft and lay down. She takes out the communicator and starts typing an email for a certain someone, blushing as she types.

'To: Xenfis
Subject: Birthday Party Invitation
Message:
I want to let you know that tomorrow, there is going to be a party for me. It'll be held here at this base in the mess hall, so I'm inviting you to join on the occasion. You'll also be able to meet several other personnel too who will attend.'

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Re: [Joint] [15+] Mysterious Shadow Elites
« Reply #11 on: December 26, 2009, 11:18:34 PM »
Her eyes felt heavy, the strain of using the afterburners was obvious when she moved forward and felt her sticky back as it peeled off the seat. She looked ahead at the air-field, which was still a good five minutes out, she sent the counter sign - which told the base who she was.

Her landing gear deployed and she began her downward glide path. Her engines spinning down as she neared the runway. "Almost.... almost..." she said, she could hear the sound of metal rapping the side of her craft - even though the flap had torn off, the bearing that kept it to the aircraft were slapping against the tail wing.

A satisfying 'thump' sounded as her wheels touched the runway and she yanked back on the throttle and brought her craft to a slow crawl. She moved toward the hanger and saw several mechanics gawking at her damaged tail.

Popping the canopy; she pulled herself out of the plane and handed her helmet to a tech. "Get my plane fixed please, I need to talk to the commander. Also, remove the flight data recorder and send it to my room," she told them and headed off to the commanders office.
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Re: [Joint] [15+] Mysterious Shadow Elites
« Reply #12 on: December 26, 2009, 11:39:11 PM »
Xenfis plops onto his bed, face into his pillow. His thoughts, heavy. His hopes, almost lost. His destiny, set..what was he to do? Stop Zeon on his own?..

"Gah....idk what to do..this is all so complicated..I know I cant take Zeon all on my own..but the most I can do is at least help in the fight"..Just as he begin to shut his eyes, his communication device goes off.

"Hmm?.." He wonder who it could be, he opens it and sees a message in his in-box. "Its from Mariko". He begins to read the message to himself. "Oh so its going to be her birthday..hmm what should I get her?"..As he begins to ponder, he sends a message to the Commander. He closes his device, waiting for a reply. He looks up at the ceiling and just lets his mind kinda..wonder off.

"Mariko, is an excellent fighter, and pilot. She will be a great cause to our fight...together, I think we will stand a chance". He begins to grin, and relaxes.

His device goes off, as he opens the message, a silent yes followed by a big smile. "Now the question is what shall I get her? Hmm, I'm gonna have to think about his one..." He closes his eyes and begins to think...


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Re: [Joint] [15+] Mysterious Shadow Elites
« Reply #13 on: December 26, 2009, 11:58:57 PM »
Looking at the ceiling, Mariko wonders what she'll wear for tomorrow. She begins to think of wearing a dress, or something more traditional, or something. She can't quite come to a decision when her communicator starts ringing. "Hm? I wonder if its father.." She takes the device out of her pocket to answer, not really looking at who the call was from, "Hello?"

"Mariko, its your father." Came a voice on the other end. "I have a surprise for you tonight. I'll be there later tonight."

Suddenly, Mariko's heart began to race extremely fast, "S-surprise? What is it?"

"Now it wouldn't be a surprise if I told you, now would it?" He replied. "Give me an hour and I'll be there." He then hangs up, as he travels to the base entrance.

Mariko shakes her head. She couldn't believe her father is going to see her for once since his work keeps him very busy. "Did.. he.. really get time off...." Now, more than ever, she's looking forward to this than anyone could have hoped for. She hops down from the wing and runs to her room to change into something else.

In another area of the base, the commander sends out an email for all personnel at the base, with the exception of Mariko.

'I would like to inform every pilot, mechanic, engineer, and everyone else, that a party for one of our special pilots will be held tomorrow in the mess hall during the evening. I'm allowing anyone and everyone to attend this event if they so wish.'

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Re: [Joint] [15+] Mysterious Shadow Elites
« Reply #14 on: December 27, 2009, 12:03:25 AM »
Her eyes arched up at the intercom before she shook her head. "A party huh? Dunno if I'll attend," she said silently and continued toward the commanders office. As she headed across the way she stopped briefly to allow a vehicle to pass, it was headed toward the hospital in the distance.

She kept her pace though; arriving at the building with the commanders office in less than five minutes. Renae elbowed the door open, one of the buildings guards noticed her aggitation and decided not to mess with her right now.

As she neared the commanders door; she stopped and then knocked gently. "Commander, Renae here to see you," she said.